2. I would give mine a 7 because I tried and did what i could with my time.
3. I would make my camera less shaky and probably choose a different topic.
4. Because it has kind of an unexpected twist and a strange end.
5. I would say I might deserve a B because I think I used my time efficiently and did well.
Cool presentation! It was kind of weird how it just had The End, but Kevin was pretty cool, considering I named him. My only complaint is that I wasn't credited for naming the dinosaur, but other than that, good job!
ReplyDeleteIt was confusing that you wrote the end in the beginning. I didn't really get the theme to the story. You could have maybe turned the board so the video wouldn't be sideways. The camera placement good and didn't move too much. I liked the dinosaur.
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